Chapter XIII

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“had suddenly become transformed into the mystic--; wide-eyed, dreamy, yet intense.” delete the semicolon and following space.

(great things of life,” she said in low, earnest, tones.) delete the last comma.

“I have been fearful of intruding on your strongly individual, self-contained, personality.” delete the last comma.

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“he conceived the _briliant_ idea of making over his kingdom” to _brilliant_.

“I gave that _maw_ worm ten guineas for it” to _mean_.

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