Chapter XXI

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“at least give _the_ the comfort of your sympathy” to _me_.

Change:

I viewed him as the insurance director views interested in his decease, not in his survival. I loathed him, the generalised “proposer,”--but inversely; for I was but I did not hate him.

to:

I viewed him as the insurance director views the generalised “proposer,”--but inversely; for I was interested in his decease, not in his survival. I loathed him, but I did not hate him.

(But are you quite sure--thought you might have taken it away with you.”) add _I_ and a space after the em-dash.

“He drew _h mself_ to the edge of the bed, and, thrusting” to _himself_.

“It had parts--_recognisble_ members.” to _recognisable_.

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“He gave me a few _explcit_ directions as to how to find” to _explicit_.

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